In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

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creates problems for governments

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outweigh the

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essay, I would like to evaluate

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situation. In my opinion, the

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of having an ageing

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outweigh the

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improved welfare, an established culture and a high standard of living in the country.

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, when we look at EU countries in

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context, we can say that they have an elderly

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. Developed and educated societies have improved health systems and lower birth rates.

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, academic debates show us that the elderly

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plays a crucial role in the countries of a safe and quiet life.

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are two

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for governments a high elderly

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a threat to high production volume and leads to an increase in retired pay that the government have to pay them. Meanwhile,

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problem can balanced with skilled immigration. Countries with high economic standards must maintain the quality of quality education and high production systems

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negative impact. Additional resources underline the importance of the

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of having an

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population

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, If a country has a strong, educated culture and

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living standards,

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is significantly important.

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, managing production and investment activities is easier and requires less

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. It wouldn’t be wrong to say that the

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of having an ageing

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outweigh the

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