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Writing Samples
Band 4

(complaint letter)

Dear manager In
this
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letter
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letter,
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i
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I
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 want to tell you about the problem that
have
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has
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 faced
in
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at
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 the
hotel
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 Speaking of my choice of
hotel
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,
i
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I
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 have seen your
hotel
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 on the internet and lots of people have left
postive
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positive
feedbacks
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feedback
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.
In addition
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hotel
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the hotel
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 is situated near the city and it was good for my plans. But
i
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I
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 have faced some problems
in
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at
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 the
hotel
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 First of all the problem is that
,
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apply
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room
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the room
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 was dirty so
pillows
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the pillows
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, mattress and
others
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other
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 things
too
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were too
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 dirty.
Secondy
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Secondly
 the
hotel
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 service
have
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has
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 worked very slowly. Whenever
i
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I
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 ordered a meal, the staff
has
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came after half an hour. It is awful In my opinion major issues are the lack of workers and
in
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apply
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the absence of good work
of
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in
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 the work system. I believe the
hotel
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 management will review
this
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 problem and quickly find
solution
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a solution
the solution
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. Kind regards Dad of
messi
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Messi
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Grammar
Make sure to capitalize the first letter of every sentence, including the beginning of the letter.
Coherence
Consider breaking down your issues into separate paragraphs for clarity and to follow a more formal structure.
Task Achievement
Provide specific solutions or recommendations to address your concerns, which would strengthen your overall response.
Task Achievement
You have clearly identified the problems you faced in the hotel, which is essential for a complaint letter.
Tone
Your tone is respectful, which is important in a formal complaint letter.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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