The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graph given illustrates a comparison of the number of pupils participating in various school types over a nine-year period between 2000 and 2009. All figures are measured in percentages. From an
overall
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perspective ,it is evident that the proportions of pupils in community
schools
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saw an upward trend,
whereas
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a reverse pattern could observed in other
schools
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through the
years
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shown. In 2000 the data on voluntary-controlled
schools
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was the highest ,at 52. The number of pupils attending grammar school was lower. Community and specialist
schools
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,
however
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, accounted for the lowest value, at 12. In the following
years
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, specialist grammar and voluntary-controlled
schools
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have
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the same point that all decreased to 11,19,38 in the first five
years
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then
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and then
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continued to fall to 10,12,20 in the
last
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four
years
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.
besides
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that, there was a constant up in community
schools
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to 32 in 2005 and reached
the
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a
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peak of 58 in 2009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, years with synonyms.
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