Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is no denying the fact that providing free health

services

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for citizens is essential nowadays.

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held belief that an advanced procedure may not be available

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expensive costs, there is

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an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider

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crucial for the government to provide

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services

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and I totally agree.

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with, having free

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of health care will improve the quality of

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life

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, people who have a check-up in the hospital every 6 months will be immunised against many viruses.

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, in Saudi Arabia, we have

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great hospitals and free

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which make us comfortable that the government look after us Another point to consider, poor countries

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as India, experience a huge issue of health

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the cost of procedures. It is

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possible to say that an increase in population will always come with medical problems.

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, more than 2 million Indians died

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illnesses in 2002. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that citizens must have a high-end hospital, medical technology

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well-trained doctors.

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Make sure your opinion is clearly expressed throughout the essay by reiterating it in each paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the logical flow by using more linking words (e.g., 'Moreover,' 'In addition,' or 'On the other hand').

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Expand on your examples to provide more detail and context, which will strengthen your arguments.

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You present a clear stance on the issue, advocating for free health services, which is important in a discursive essay.

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Your examples, although brief, are pertinent and help to illustrate your points.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

192 words

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