The table shows the proportions of schoolchildren attending four school categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the proportions of schoolchildren attending four school categories. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart compares student attendance among four different
schools
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– private,
language
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,
specialist
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, and public – over a five-year period, from 2004 to 2008.
Overall
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,
Specialist
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Schools
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were the most popular in 2004 and 2006,
while
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in 2008
this
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result
is
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was
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achieved by Public
Schools
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. The highest percentage in 2004
is
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allocated to
Specialist
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Schools
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,
as
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apply
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52%, followed by
Language
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Schools
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, equal to 25%.
Instead
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, private
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and Public
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have the same figure (12%).
Specialist
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Schools
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decreased sharply from 2004 to 2006 to 38%,
while
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Public
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grew dramatically, reaching 35%. Private
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and
Language
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Schools
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changed marginally, following a downward trend. In 2008, Public
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increased again, and they roughly doubled (60%).
Specialist
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Schools
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continued to fall. From 38% in 2006,
this
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category
turn
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turned
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26% just 2 years later.
Similarly
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, Private
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and
Language
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Schools
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, becoming just a minority. Only 10% of students
has chosen
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chose
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private
schools
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in 2008,
while
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just 12% attended
language
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schools
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in the same year.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, language, specialist with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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