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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart
provide
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provides
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 key
informati
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information
 about the amounts of
waste
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 produced by three companies over 15 years. The units
measuerd
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measured
measure
 in
tonnes
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.
Overall
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, it's clear from the graph that
comany
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company
 A
have
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has
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 the highest
wasted
Correct quantifier usage
number of wasted
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tonnes
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 over
this
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 period.
In addition
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,
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company
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Company
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C
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have
Wrong verb form
had
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 more than 9
tonnes
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 wasted in 2015 and it's the highest one among
this
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 group,
wheres
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whereas
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comapny
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company
 B
have
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had
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 the lowest
wasted
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number of wasted
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tonnes
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 in the same year
like
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as
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it
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apply
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provided in the graph.
According to
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 what is shown,
company
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C
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start
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started
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as
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with
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 the lowest
amounts
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amount
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 of
waste
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 produced with nearly 3
tonnes
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 in 2000 but it rapidly
increases
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increased
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 until it reach more than 9
tonnes
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 in 2015 and
be
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is
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 the highest
company
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 that
wasted
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wastes
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tonnes
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.
Nevertheless
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,
company
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 B is the opposite
to
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of
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company
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Company
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C
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, it start as
huge
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a huge
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 wasted production but
take
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takes
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large
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a large
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continuos
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continuous
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decline
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to decline
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 to reach the lowest wasted
company
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 in the group with just 3
tonnes
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waste
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of waste
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 produced. In terms of the largest
company
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 that
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waste
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wastes
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tonnes
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,
company
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C
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 account to be the largest one.
Moreover
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,
company
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 A
have
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has
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 the
gighest
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highest
decreases
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decrease
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 in wasted
tonnes
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 and
account
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accounts
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to be
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being
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 the lowest in the group.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tonnes, company, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amounts" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • significant changes
  • increase
  • decrease
  • waste production
  • period
  • compare
  • analyze
  • main features
  • highlight
  • decline
  • rise
  • steady
  • variations
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