The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph describes where Britons usually come to connect the
Internet
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between
home
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, work, college, and library in 6 years from 1998
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, after the period, the workplace became the least visited when most British chose to use the
Internet
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at
home
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. Looking at the charts, the year 1998 showed the dominant proportion of the UK people connected to the
home
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internet
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at more than 50%
while
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the library's figure was the lowest at 10%. In the same year, the workplace gave 29% of UK citizens access to the
Internet
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while
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this
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percentage for college was 20%. After 1998, the rate of Britons using
home
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internet
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saw a small decrease to 45% in 2000 before the upward trend to 55% in 2004. The figure for working location had a dramatic drop to 10 after remained stable until 2002. The percentage of UK college
internet
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access did not change during the years and was nearly 20% in 2004. There is the same situation with the library visiting proportion with a peak rate was 15% in 2000
then
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went back to 12% in the next 4 years

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, home with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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