The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates
energy
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consumption
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by six different kinds of fuels in the U.S.A. from 1980 to 2030.  
It is clear that
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this
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graph contained history information, in 1980 and 2008, and future
analysation
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, between 2008 and 2030. The
energy
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used by America presented a trend of increase.   The
consumption
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of petrol and oil per quadrillion
unit
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units
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began
with
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35 and was expected to rise until around 48. Coal
also
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maintained a steady increase, which
it
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started
from
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16, and it
would climb
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to its peak at 30. The amount of natural gas fluctuated between 23 and 17, and, lately, it was likely to remain stable at 23 quadrillion units.   From 1980 to 2014, the quantity that the United
State
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consumed coal fuel and natural gas was roughly the same, but the
energy
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of coal would surpass natural gas in 2014 as the secondary
energy
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consumption
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. There is relatively little change in the figure for Nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower.
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, nuclear
consumption
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would reach its peak at 6 quadrillion units which was followed closely by solar/wind (5) and hydropower (3).

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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