The graph below shows the average monthly change in prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The data demonstrates the monthly variation in the cost of three different metals in the

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2014.

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, it is clear from the graph that significant changes took place and a lot of growth

as well as

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decline are shown.  The proportions show that Nickel was at the top of the list at the beginning of the

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, at a cost of 6%

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in comparison to

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month. Yet, its expense did not

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long as it dropped to 1% by March and continued to drop until June. In June it

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reached its lowest price by accounting for -4% from past months. It

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witnessed a gradual increase in all of the following months, July, August and September which was

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followed by a decline in October.

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, that fall did not

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for long as

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the end of the

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Nickel was at 1%

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. Zinc showed some similarities to

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in both its growth and falls. At the beginning of the

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year

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it showed

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a slight

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increase

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3%

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which was

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followed by a fall until

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%

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in June. The price

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seemed to be steady until October , with a minimal fall yet, that was followed by a

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in both November

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December at 2% variations. For copper

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, fluctuations took place but

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were

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minimal

as compared to the prior two metals. It starts the

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at a 2%

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which

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dropped to 0% just before half of the

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. It went back to 1% by the end of 2 third of the

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with a slight increase in December aiming at a little under 2%.