There is no denying the fact that many individuals
thought
that being wealthy is very crucial as Wrong verb form
think
this
will give them the power Linking Words
for supporting
other Change preposition
to support
people
, Use synonyms
while
others have an opinion Linking Words
opposes
that. I consider that rich Correct pronoun usage
that opposes
people
can help Use synonyms
other
in society
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others
To begin
with, the financial source of rich Linking Words
people
could be considered as an opportunity Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
for
job
Correct article usage
a job
to
many individuals. Change preposition
for
In other words
, they build many infrastructure, Linking Words
factories
so many labourers work there. It is Correct word choice
and factories
also
possible to say that rich Linking Words
people
often pay a tax, and Use synonyms
as a
Linking Words
result
Add a comma
result,
this
will boost the economy of a lot of countries. Linking Words
For example
, the developing Linking Words
counties
which take high taxes, might have less Correct your spelling
countries
without
work and could be more economically stable than other countries.
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apply
In addition
, wealthy Linking Words
people
support many restitute by giving them money to settle in houses and build them schools for teaching. Use synonyms
More over
, giving money Correct your spelling
Moreover
for
charities encourages other Change preposition
to
people
to pay Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
for
that
, Correct pronoun usage
them
as well as
they organise a campaign that Linking Words
build
hospitals and Change the verb form
builds
buy
medicines for other nations that suffer from poverty and wars. Correct subject-verb agreement
buys
For instance
, Linking Words
Red
Cross is an organisation from all over the world that arranges charities to help poor Correct article usage
the Red
people
Use synonyms
of
other countries Change preposition
in
from
the rich Change preposition
apply
people
across the world.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
although
wealthy individuals are few and many of them reject to help others, their charities have an essential role Linking Words
for
helping many Change preposition
in
people
globally.Use synonyms
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