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The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the population
growth
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 across three continents—
Latin
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America
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,
Africa
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, and Asia—
as well as
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 the global average, over three different years, including future projections.
Overall
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, all regions demonstrate an upward trend in population
growth
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. Notably,
Latin
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America
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 exhibits the most significant increase compared to the other regions.
According to
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 the chart, in 1950,
Latin
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America
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 had the highest population
growth
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 rate at approximately 40%,
while
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 the other regions remained below 30%.
Africa
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 and Asia showed relatively similar figures, standing at around 10% and 13%, respectively. By 2000,
Latin
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America
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 experienced a remarkable rise, reaching nearly 70%, the highest recorded in any given year. In comparison, the global average remained under 50%,
while
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Africa
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 and Asia both climbed to about 40%. Looking ahead to the 2030 projections,
Latin
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America
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 is expected to achieve the highest rate, approaching 80%. The global average is predicted to reach around 60%, maintaining its position as the second-highest figure.
Africa
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 and Asia are forecast to have the lowest
growth
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 rates, each estimated to be slightly above 40%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words growth, america, africa, latin with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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