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Writing Samples
Band 4

Your neighbor keeps his/her animal in the garden. Write to him/her about it and the inconvenience it causes you and your family. In your letter · tell what the problem is · explain why it causes inconvenience · suggest a possible solution to it · say what actions you might take if the need arises.

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Dear Mr Andrew, I hope
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 letter finds you well,I am Pooja a
practicing
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 Advocate from Anna Nagar, Chennai,Thirumangalam which is the most prominent area.I have been living in
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 locality for many years.
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, I am your
neighbor
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neighbour
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, who is residing adjacent to your villa.The
majour
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major
 problem, which
i
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I
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 am
faceing
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facing
 is your dog which is very annoying and very disturbing
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tress
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trees
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passing
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 my garden.
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, it makes a mess in my garden and
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distroy
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destroys
 my plants. My request would be, to lock the house doors and gate so that I would be in a peaceful state. If you cannot take any
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actions
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againts
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against
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 issue,
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would
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 write to the
goverment
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government
 to take serious action against you and your dog. I would be looking forward
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 a prompt and
possitive
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positive
 response from your end. Thanking you R.POOJA

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coherence cohesion
Consider improving the opening by expressing your thought in a more personal way.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity.
task achievement
Ensure to use correct spelling for words like 'major', 'facing', 'destroys', and 'government' for better accuracy.
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Try to soften your tone slightly when suggesting potential actions; a more diplomatic approach may foster better neighborly relations.
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You have clearly stated the problem regarding the dog and how it is causing inconvenience.
coherence cohesion
Your closing statement expresses a desire for a prompt response, which is polite and appropriate for the context.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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