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The table below shows the amount of waste production(in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different years over a twenty-year period.(table is shown in the picture)

The table below shows the amount of waste production(in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different years over a twenty-year period.(table is shown in the picture)
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The data illustrate how much
production
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 of
waste
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 is produced (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries in three different
years
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 over twenty
years
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.
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, in 1980, the USA produced 131
million
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 tonnes of
waste
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 and over twenty
years
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, it had an upward trend with 192 in 2000. Ireland had a
waste
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production
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 in 1980 of 0,6, but in 2000 it dramatically rose to 5
million
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. The same rise happened in Japan with a difference between 1980 and 2000 of 25
million
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 tonnes.
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, Portugal and Poland fluctuated over these 20
years
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 with a slight rise between 2 and 3
million
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. Korea was the only one that had a decrease between 1990 and 2000 with a loss of 12
million
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 tons of
waste
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. In conclusion, most countries had an increase in
waste
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production
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 and only Korea decreased its
production
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.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, waste, years, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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