You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter give details of the camera and where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear sir , I am writing

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in the hope that you help me with my problem ,On 27 of November I

traviled

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travelled

from Jeddah to London before that ,I

purshased

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purchased

a Canon camera from your store at

jeddah

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international airport and I paid with my

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credit card and it cost $999.

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, when I arrived in London I

discoverd

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discovered

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some

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missing items

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from

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the box which

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are

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the main battery and the charger

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for

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the camera ,I think it was a mistake

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you because I did not

oppened

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open

the box until I arrived and I was shocked that time thinking of what should do until I saw your

emeil

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on the

discreption

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description

. I believe that you need to help me

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this

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issue and I am asking for compensation

about

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for

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what

happend

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happened

to me in

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shop .In

additon

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addition

,I hope that you will assure to your employees to double

cheack

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check

customr's

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customer's

customers

pershaes

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perhaps

purchases

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before they leave the shop .

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,I will provide my zip code to let you bring my items to my location. Abdullah Alqahtani Yours faithfully

abdullahthgfan57Fri Apr 18 2025

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General Improvement

Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors.

Tone

Try to use more formal language, especially in a complaint letter.

Structure

Consider breaking your ideas into paragraphs more effectively. Each paragraph should address a single point clearly.

Content

You clearly stated the purpose of your letter at the beginning and provided the necessary details about your purchase.

Communication

You communicated your issue and your request for action clearly, which is essential for a complaint letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

local representative
important items missing
purchase details
model and brand
missing accessories
inconvenience
use to its full extent
urgent request
partial refund
alternative solution
exchange unit
correct the issue
look forward to your prompt response

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