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The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The tabular chart illustrates the excellent rating given by
first year
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first-year
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 college graduates
to
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 three distinct subjects.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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commerce
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 received
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 high numbering from students in every sector
while
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 the opposite trend was observed in
law
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.
Moreover
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, teaching, and tutoring of economics and
commerce
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 had more than 90% of very good ratings
however
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 in
law
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 the ratio was
in
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apply
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between 60 to 80%.
According to
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 the data, in economics teaching accounted for
95
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a 95
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% rating and 5% less was for tutors
whereas
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 the number for the information before the course and other resources was almost
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 (60%).
Additionally
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, 81% was given to printing resources.
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, the highest ratio in
law
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 was for other resources (80%) and tutor, print, and pre-study data
were
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 rated 76%, 70%,and 72% respectively.
Also
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, 62% was for
teaching
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the teaching
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 sector which was the lowest number in
rating
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the rating
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 of
law
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 courses.
Although
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, 95% of excellent feedback was given for pre-course data and teaching for
commerce
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 subjects, 81% for other sources.
In addition
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, 85% of ratings in
commerce
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 were given by students for printing sources and 93% for tutoring.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words commerce, law with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • very good rating
  • resources
  • satisfaction
  • first-year students
  • course
  • compare
  • trend
  • pattern
  • discrepancy
  • implications
  • overall findings
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