The charts below give information about the world’s top three producers of four different dairy products (milk, cheese, butter, milk powder) in 2012.

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The bar chart presents data on the dairy
production
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of
milk
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, cheese, butter, and
milk
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powder by the top three producers in 2012, with quantities measured in metric
tonnes
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.
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, the European Union emerged as the predominant producer in the realms of
milk
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and cheese,
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India and China respectively secured the top spots in the
production
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of butter and
milk
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powder. In
milk
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production
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, the EU’s output reached 142,970 metric
tonnes
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, constituting a notable 40% of the total
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by the three leaders, surpassing India by approximately 15,000 metric
tonnes
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and the United States by over 50,000 metric
tonnes
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. Cheese
production
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mirrored
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trend, with the EU producing 7,120 metric
tonnes
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, more than half the combined output of the next two largest producers.
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, India dominated butter
production
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, yielding 4,500 metric
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, a figure more than double that of the
EU’s
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and substantially higher than the United States’
production
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of 810 metric
tonnes
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. The
production
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of
milk
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powder showcased a different leader, with China at the forefront with 1,200 metric
tonnes
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, marginally exceeding New Zealand’s
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and significantly outstripping the EU’s output of 770 metric
tonnes
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.

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