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The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph gives information about the fluctuation in the percentage of
internet
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 consumers in three different countries are USA,
Canada
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, and Mexico between 1999 and 2009. The y-axis represents the proportion of the population
while
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 the x-axis indicates the period of time.
Overall
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,the country with the highest use of
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Internet
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 is
Canada
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,followed by the United States of America and
lastly
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 Mexico. Throughout the time frame,
Canada
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's use of the
internet
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 skyrocketed to 100%
whereas
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 the utilization of the
internet
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 by the other countries which are
Canada
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 and Mexico at around 90% and 45% respectively.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • users
  • Internet
  • trend
  • fluctuated
  • increased
  • remained stable
  • growth rate
  • sharp increase
  • anomalies
  • economic development
  • government policies
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • comparisons
  • initial
  • subsequent
  • consistently
  • peaked
  • plateaued
  • significance
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