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The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides key information about the usage of
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water
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 for different purposes in six different countries in 2001.
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, it is clear from the graph that Russia has used a significant amount of
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agricultural
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 by 1663.
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, Australia has used 341 of the domestic
water
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 which is the highest usage among the other countries,
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 China has used only 26 of the domestic
water
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According to
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 what is shown, most of the countries
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 used
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water
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 mainly in
agricultural
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 sector. Turkey has used 1462 and Canada used 1238 of the
water
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agricultural
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, China used 606 of the
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agricultural
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. In terms of the highest usage of industrial
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, Turkey
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the
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had
reach
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 a peak at 731.
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, Canada used 532 of the
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 in the industry.
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, China used a small share of the industrial
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 by 71.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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