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The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph shows key information about
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export
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exports
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 in
Australin
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Australia
Australian
 with four countries, the information
shows
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is shown
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 in percentages.
Overall
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, it
clear
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is clear
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 from the line graph there are 4 countries
that is
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 japan,
us
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the us
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 ,china,
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and india
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india
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India
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,
also
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 the 4 countries show
incline
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an incline
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 and
decline
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 in previous years .
According to
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 what
shown
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is shown
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 from 1990 to 2012
the
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apply
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exports to
china
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China
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 kept
rasing
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rising
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up
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apply
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,
while
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other
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others
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 like us
shows
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showed
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decline
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a decline
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 after the end of the
meantion
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mentioned
 period,india shows
at
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in
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 2010 a small high percentage of
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export
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exports
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then
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 kept
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decline
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declining
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 by the end of the year, japan
also
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 shows
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decline
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a decline
the decline
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 of the percentage between 25 till nearly 15
percent
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per cent
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. In conclusion, it clear
that is
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 most country that
australian
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Australian
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export
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 to it is
china
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China
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which
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whish
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which
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 shows increasing
of
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in
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 the percentage from almost non to nearly 30 ,
secondly
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India
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india
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India
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 and the third country is the us and
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last
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the last
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 country shows
huge
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a huge
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 drop
of
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in
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export
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 is
japan
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Japan
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, that is".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, decline with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentages
  • exports
  • trend
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • stable
  • economic ties
  • demand
  • decline
  • recovery
  • policy changes
  • trade relationship
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • temporary surge
  • specific events
  • incentives
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