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The table and charts below give information on police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two diagrams display a police
budget
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 and how the
money
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 was spent during a year period in an area of Britain.
Overall
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, it is clear from the table that the police
budget
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 has increased between the years 2017 and 2018 having almost a 14
million
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pounds
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 difference. And for the
money
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 spent, Salaries showed dominance in the given period.
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, the National Government have slightly increased in
budget
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 with a little under 3
million
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pounds
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 difference,
in contrast
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, Local Taxes faced a drastic rise from a
budget
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 of 91.2
million
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 to 102.3
million
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pounds
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 in 2018. Other sources
such
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 as grants, made a difference of 14
million
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pounds
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 between the years. In terms of the
money
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 spent, Salaries made more than 3/4 of the
money
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 spent in regards to both years. Even though technology was only at 8% it increased to make up 14% of the
money
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 by 2018. Buildings
as well as
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 transport have not changed in proportions accounting for 17%

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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, money, million, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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