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The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.(Anelya2)

The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.(Anelya2)
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The presented table illustrates the average number of British
adults'
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 and children's earnings spent on 4 common items
such
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 as food, electronics, melody and
videos
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 in the year 1998.
Overall
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, it is evident that grown-up spent their money on food and a little bit on electronics
whereas
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 the proportion of other things was less.
Moreover
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, youngsters more waste earnings to buy electronic devices, music and
videos
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 than nourishment in the given time period.
It is clear that
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 the figure for adults spending more on buying food
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 reaches exactly a quarter. The highest percentage of spending for sustenance was females, which had 39%,
while
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 males got 14%. But males waste their incomes buying electronic devices, which reached 10%.
Furthermore
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, the other things got less than 10% in both genders.
On the other hand
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, children preferred to waste their caches to buy electrical equipment, music and
videos
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. Other young genders bought music almost in the same percentage
while
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 in electronic and
videos
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 they were divided into two groups,which the number of boys spent more on both items and got the same percentage
such
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 as 18% in the same time span.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words videos with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
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