The data depicts the plan for a new industrial building and residential location for workers.
From an
overall
perspective, the number of houses decreased over time as a parking lot, swimming pools and industrial buildings respectively replaced residential buildings. The idea of including a swimming pool in the plan is highly approved as individuals could rest and relax after a long day of hard work.
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, It can be seen that the plan has a good transportation route as the houses and industrial areas are all nicely connected to one another giving the employees an opportunity to commute easily from work and home. Linking Words
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this
can be detrimental to the health of the workers because of air and noise pollution coming from the factories.
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Secondly
, the addition of a parking lot to the blueprint is greatly beneficial to the residents as people will easily be able to park their cars and reduce traffic congestion. Unfortunately,one parking space is not going to be sufficient as there are many people in the area which could cause more traffic problems.
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,it would be a great concept if the office and meeting rooms were not widely spaced from each other. These buildings being at two polar ends would make it difficult for employees to navigate their way during work hours.Linking Words
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