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The line chart depicts the data of total participants for 5 distinct activities at a Melbourne social centre, in Australia between 2000 to 2020. Overall, those 5 different activities at a Melbourne social centre had their own patterns throughout the period.

The line chart depicts the data of total participants for 5 distinct activities at a Melbourne social centre, in Australia between 2000 to 2020. Overall, those 5 different activities at a Melbourne social centre had their own patterns throughout the period.
The line graph illustrates the information
of
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 the
number
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 of individuals
participated
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who participated
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 in five different programs from 2000 to 2020 at a Melbourne community centre in Australia.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest
number
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 of
participants
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 were in film clubs
however
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 the opposite trend was observed in music shows.
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,
participants
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of
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in
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 table tennis significantly rose in 20
years
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while
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 amateur dramatics represented a sharp decline after 2005.
According to
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 the data, music performances started after 2005 with around 11
participants
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 in 2010 and the
number
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 kept rising to 19 till 2020.
Although
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 in 2000, there were less than 20
participants
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 in indoor tennis the
number
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 gradually increased to 20 in 2010. After that, it sharply surged to 53 individuals in the following decade.
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, there was a fluctuating trend in the range of people
practised
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who practised
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 martial arts. In 2000, the
number
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 was 46
then
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 almost 30 in 2005 and the same pattern was followed in the next 15
years
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 till it reached 45 in 2020.
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, the cinema club was the most popular activity over the period of 20
years
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.
Initially
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, there were more than 60 people performing in the film group
whereas
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 the
number
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 steadily dropped to 60 in 2010 and in the next decade it re-accounted for its initial
number
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.
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, the drama performers accounted for 25 in the first 5
years
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then
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 the
number
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 drastically decreased to 5 in the following
years
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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