The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The illustration displays the expected

re-construction

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reconstruction

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and development for the

sothwest

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Southwest

airport in a year from now .

Overall

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, the airport is getting expanded ,

also

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assition

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assertion

of many sectors

such

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atm

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ATM

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, sky train , car hire , bag drop and more .

In contrast

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, the removal of walkaway. First , the places of departures and arrivals will not face any differences . Likely , the passport control , customs , and security . In the

departure's

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departure

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sector

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sector,

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the location of check-in is just inverted .

In addition

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, a section for bag dropping will be added , and a new cafe will be constructed .

Furthermore

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, brand new shops are going to be built next year .

Secondly

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, the arrivals section now barely

have

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has

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any services .

Therefore

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, three services will be added next year . An

atm

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ATM

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will added , and just like the departures sector a cafe will be constructed .

Furthermore

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, a car rental will be serving the arrival sector .

Moreover

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due to

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the removal of

walkaway

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walkaways

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a sky train will be serving both sectors , with 10 sections added

enhance

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to enhance

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the ability

of welcoming

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to welcome

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vistors

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visitors

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

199 words

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The map below shows the town of Sanditon Beach before and after an airport was built. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?