You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include : &Where you stayed. & What the problems were. & How they can fix your complaints.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter to express my unsatisfactory

about

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with

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your services. I am Alexa, I checked in room number 402 yesterday. First of all, I would like to tell you that I booked your hotel because

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five

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star

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five-star

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hotel and plenty of good reviews

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the website so, I

believed

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believe

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worth

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me to pay for the best

service

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However

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, once I came here

I'm

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I was

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so disappointed

about

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with

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the room and services.

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, I found water leaks in the bathroom.

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, I found the

rubbishes

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rubbish

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still in the bin

moreover

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, there are many

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of dust

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dust

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around the windows. And

the

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apply

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last

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, I put the button do not disturb in the morning but the

house keeping

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housekeeping

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still

ring

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rang

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the bell and tried to get in to do

service

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in my room

that

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apply

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wake

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woke

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me up.

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, I think it

does

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not fair for me that I

pay

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paid

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a high price but received

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apply

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poor

service

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so, would it be possible

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for

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you can pay me compensation

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apply

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half

price

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the price

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of your

service

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fees. I am looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Alexa

khaonoona.supzTue Apr 22 2025

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Consider adding more details about the date of your stay and the specific services you expected to receive in a five-star hotel.

coherence and cohesion

Improve the logical flow between sentences to enhance overall coherence, such as using linking words more effectively.

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Ensure that your tone remains formal throughout the letter. Phrasing like 'it's unfair' can be softened to maintain professionalism.

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You clearly stated the main issues you encountered during your stay, which helps to convey your concerns effectively.

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Your letter includes a clear request for compensation, indicating a resolution you seek, which adds to the effectiveness of your complaint.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

195 words

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Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause?

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Young people today know more about international pop and film stars than they do about famous people in their own country's history. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people's interest in famous people from their country's history?

Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award. Who is this person Why did you choose him? What is the characteristic of a good employee?