You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.

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Dear sir/ madam I am a regular

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Correct the article-noun agreement

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of your sports centre and

therefore

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I want to apprise you of the problems that I am facing in the changing centre of the sports room. First of all, the curtains of changing rooms are very dirty and smell bad. Every time when I have to change my clothes I feel very bad.

In addition

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this

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, the door handles of washrooms are

also

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broken. Every time I have to knock when I want to use the washroom. Not only

this

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, the taps of washbasins are

also

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leaking. Owing to

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there is a lot of wastage of water. I want to request you to change the curtains as soon as possible. For the door handles and taps you can call the repairman. I know one of my friends who can help you

in finding

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a person who can do

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less budget. It is very kind of you if you can solve these problems in one month. So that more and more people can join

this

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sports centre. Hoping to hear from you soon regarding

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matter. Yours sincerely Jyoti

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coherence and cohesion

Try to organize your points in a more structured manner. For example, group similar issues together in one paragraph and use clearer topic sentences to introduce them.

task achievement

Consider expanding your suggestions to include alternative solutions or more details on how to implement them, which would show a stronger understanding of the task.

task achievement

You addressed the main issues clearly and provided specific examples of the problems you encountered, which shows good engagement with the task.

coherence and cohesion

The tone of your letter is polite and respectful, which is appropriate for a complaint letter and creates a positive impression.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

190 words

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