There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the complaints that have been made say why the reception area is important suggest how the reception area could be improved

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you well and in good spirits. I am writing

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letter to suggest some ideas about the complaints we got from our visitor.

Firstly

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, Our management got the review for the cleanliness of the red carpet pathway and another complaint was about the behaviour of the staff for not directing them into the designated place of the

company

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On the other hand

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, the reception

are

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is very important for the

company

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. There are some reasons behind them as

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, every guest does not know about the geography of the

company

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, for that front staff are the one who can help them.

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, If any visitor

need

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any help they will come to the front desk before asking to

someome

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else. Eventually, I have some

suggestion

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to improve those queries,

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we should have to start cleaning the area every hour , after

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we have to train our staff to be polite to customers and get some knowledge about the locations of different places in the

company

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. I hope

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letter

help

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to improve the productivity of the

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. Thank you Yours faithfully David

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to use complete sentences and appropriate punctuation. For example, remove unnecessary capitalizations and ensure proper spacing after commas and periods.

task achievement

Try to provide more details or examples to support your suggestions for improvement.

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The letter is polite and follows a formal structure, which is appropriate for a letter to a manager.

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You have clearly identified the complaints and emphasized the importance of the reception area.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
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for example
for instance
therefore
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

191 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

complaints
reception area
unwelcoming
signage
aesthetic appeal
directional signage
ticketing system
professionalism
feedback system
continuous improvement
welcoming atmosphere
efficient
clear signage
comfortable seating

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