The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.
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The line graph illustrates the percentages of Australian
exports
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to four countries from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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,
exports
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to China rose significantly
while
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exports
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to Japan declined. The United States and India saw relatively smaller changes over the same period. In 1990, Japan was Australia’s biggest export partner with over 25% of total
exports
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.
However
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,
this
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figure steadily decreased and reached just under 17% by 2012.
In
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contrast
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contrast,
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exports
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to China increased dramatically from about 3% in 1990 to nearly 30% in 2012 making it the top destination for Australian
exports
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by the end of the period. The percentage of
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to the US started at around 11% but gradually fell to approximately 6%. India began with the lowest figure of around 2% and experienced a slow increase until 2010 when it slightly surpassed the US.
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it declined again in 2012 India still maintained a higher export share than in the early 1990s.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • exports
  • timeline
  • analyze
  • significant increase/decrease
  • trade relationships
  • economic dependencies
  • stability
  • fluctuation
  • political events
  • Country A/B/C/D
  • trends
  • insights
  • compare/comparison
  • examine
  • reveal
  • indicate
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