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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. »

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. »
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The table provides data about
amount
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the amount
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 of five various goods (
food
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,drink,
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tabacco
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tobacco
, clothing ,footwear,
Leisure
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Esucation
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education
) consumed in five different
countries
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 (Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden,Turkey) in 2002 .
Overall
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, Turkey makes up the highest proportion
at
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of
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food
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 ,drink and
Tabacoo
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tobacco
 followed up by
irland
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Ireland
.
While
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 Italy
come
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comes
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 first in clothing and footwear and other
countries
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 are nearly close
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to
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Italy
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Italy's
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perecentage
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percentage
.
As well as
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,
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apply
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Leisure
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Education
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 has the lowest numbers among other categories. It is observed how
turkish
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Turkish
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 has the highest numbers in (
food
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,drinks and
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tabacco
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tobacco
) at 32.14% and 4,35% in ( Lesuire
education
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) .
Sweaden
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Sweden
 has
minimal
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a minimal
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number
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 in (
food
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,beverages and
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tabacco
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tobacco
) at 15,77% . But they have
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a
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high
proporation
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proportion
proportions
 in
Leisure
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education
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 at 3.22%
comparing
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compared
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 to other
countries
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 in
leisure
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education
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. in fact, Ireland has
high
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a high
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number
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 in
first
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the first
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 category (
food
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 ,drinks,
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tabacco
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tobacco
) at 28.91% and they
rancked
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ranked
 the fourth
number
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 in
leisure
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education
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2.21
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at 2.21
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% just before Spain which has the lowest
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percentage
perecentage
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percentage
 in
leisure
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education
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about
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at about
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the
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apply
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,98% but the highest
number
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 in (
food
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, beverages and
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tabacco
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tobacco
 )
To sum up
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 , in five
countries
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 , Turkish,Ireland,
italy
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Italy
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 ,Spanish ,
sweaden
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Sweden
) the most
consumes
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consumed
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 category is (
food
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 ,drinks.
tabacoo
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tobacco
) the second rank is (
cloths
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clothes
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 and footwear)
the
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and the
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lastly
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last
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 is (
leisure
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education
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)

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, tabacco, leisure, countries, education, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • food
  • drinks
  • tobacco
  • clothing
  • footwear
  • household goods
  • services
  • leisure
  • education
  • other products
  • comparison
  • highest
  • lowest
  • followed by
  • in all countries
  • various
  • summarise
  • main features
  • relevant
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • spending
  • table
  • goods
  • data
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