The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart gives information about the
developements
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developments
development
of the suit, dress and coat in
garment
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the garment
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industry between 1990 and 2010, in terms of
millions
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.
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, all three products had a
noticable
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noticeable
increase trend throughout the period. In 1990,
suit
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the suit
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had the biggest number of
product
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products
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in
factory
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, starting at 15
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millions
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million
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and had a continuous growth to around 23
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millions
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million
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at
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1995,
following
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by a
siginificant discline
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significant decline
to just over 15
at
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2005,
then
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slightly claimed to 25
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millions
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million
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at
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2010. Meanwhile,
dress
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the dress
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had a small
influctuate
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fluctuate
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between 10 and 15
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millions
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million
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with no considerable upward and downward, ending up at 15 in 2010.
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, coat increased dramatically
form
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from
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approximate
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7
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millions
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million
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in 1990 to 25
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millions
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million
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in 2010, it
surpressed
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suppressed
dress in 1995 and
over taken
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overtaken
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suit in 2000, making the smallest production become the biggest in the industry.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production volume
  • Garment factory
  • Trend (increasing, decreasing)
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Market demand
  • Technological advancements
  • Production capacity
  • Raw material availability
  • Economic conditions
  • Notable observations
  • Significant shifts
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