The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summaris the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Akrem)

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The two maps of the town called Denham illustrate

how

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what

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it was like in 1986 and how it is currently.

Overall

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, it can be seen that the town has been urbanized, with far more residential areas,

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the number of places for livestock has declined. Moving to a more detailed analysis, across

middle

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the middle

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of the town, the farmlands have been demolished and replaced with new constructions of houses. The gardens of the large house have become smaller

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the large house itself has turned into new a retirement home surrounded

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trees.

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, new apartments have been built in the retirement home. With regard to the north of the country, the bridge which is on the river has remained unchangeable. The footpath which connected the river with the large house has been knocked down to make way for new buildings near the primary school. The shops have been pulled down ,

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, the post office has not been changed over the period given.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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The two maps below show the changes in town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summaris the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Akrem)

IN MANY CITIES TODAY MOST PEOPLE LIVE IN LARGE APARTMENT BLOCKS DOES THIS KIND OF ACCOMODATION HAVE MORE ADVANTAGES OR MORE DISADVANTAGES

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

More and more people tend to watch foreign movies, so the local government should encourage the development of local film industry. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Some people enjoy change in life. While other people try to avoid it. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.