The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
is solar panel photovoltaic cells absorb the sunshine.
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Second
Seconded
Seconed
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Second
stage
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DC power transforms
this
Linking Words
energy to
to
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apply
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the
water
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tube third
stage
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the
water
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tube has a bore pump
Correct pronoun usage
that send
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send
Correct subject-verb agreement
sends
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the
water
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to
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apply
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high
in
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into
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the
water
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tank fourth
stage
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the
water
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tank
take
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takes
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it to a village
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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