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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
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The figure depicts how much money was averagely spent on various products by buyers in five different
countries
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 across the world in 2002.
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, it can be concluded that people in
Turkey
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 were the massive users of the covered items in
this
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 survey by being the leading spenders in food, drinks
and
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tobacco and leisure and education categories. It was
also
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 the send most significant consumer of
clothing
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the clothing
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 and footwear category.
Turkey
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 was the leading purchaser of food, beverages and tobacco with 32.14%, followed by Ireland being the second most user of these items with 28.91%.
Besides
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 these two
countries
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,
Spain
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, Italy and Sweden had the highest contribution in buying these items respectively.
Spain
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 comprised 18.8% which was more than the two other
countries
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.
In contrast
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, in the clothes and shoes section, Italy had the biggest share with exactly 9% and
then
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Turkey
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,
Spain
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 and
Irelend
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Ireland
 had the largest percentages sequentially after it with all of them being in the same range around 6%. Sweden had the smallest contribution in
this
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 sector with 5.4% For the leisure and education group, the proportion of these five various
countries
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 was
similarly
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 the same with
Turkey
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 being the top among them with 4.35% and
Spain
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 rated the lowest with 1.98%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, turkey, spain with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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