The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data.

The graph show changes in spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to university lecturer describing the data.
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The two present diagrams demonstrate how much money people spend on their everyday habits in 2001 and 1971. Categories include different goods: cars and petrol, food, books, computers, furniture and going to restaurants.
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, by 2001 expenses for technical devices have significantly increased,
while
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costs for products have dramatically fallen. At the same time, people have begun to spend more money on eating out. In detail, if we look at the 1971 chart, it is obvious that an average person could not afford expensive expenses. Almost half of the spending in
this
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year was ranked by food. Less important purchases were cars and petrol which made up 22% and 10% of
a
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the
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spending budget respectively.
By contrast
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, in 2001
the
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apply
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most of
charges
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the charges
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were spent on cars,
instead
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of food in 1971.
Moreover
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, eating at home and eating out ranked the equality position in the budget of people accounting for 14% of the annual spending.
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, expenses for computers grew by almost 5 times more,
while
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for books decreased
around
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5 times.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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