A friend told you recently that he/she had gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will be suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend about your planned party ask what the restaurant is called and for directions to get there ask what kind of food it serves and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Pat,

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.I am writing

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letter to get a brief description of the hotel that you have visited lately ,for my birthday party next week. I was just

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place for my celebration. I was seeking some details of the restaurant from you to make my decision like name, contact details and location to reach

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curious about the food being served at the eatery. Is it Chinese or an Indian? Because I was especially looking for an Indian one . Is it spacious, as I am inviting 200 guests to the event

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recommend some of your favourite dishes from the menu so that I can put them in

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Hoping to hear from you soon . Yours with love, Prabh

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better clarity. The request for details about the restaurant could be better structured by breaking it into specific questions or points.

task achievement

Include the restaurant's name in your questions for a clearer request. It will help your friend understand exactly what information you need.

coherence and cohesion

Try to vary your sentence structures and use more complex sentences to enhance the overall quality of your writing. This can demonstrate a higher level of writing proficiency.

suitable writing tone

Your letter maintains a warm and friendly tone, which is appropriate for writing to a friend.

complete response

You’ve clearly stated the purpose of your letter, making it easy for the reader to understand your intentions.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

150 words

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