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Band 5.5

Write a letter to the local council about the problem of the road near your house Explain where you live Describe the problem Explain when you want him to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to complain about the poor service your institution provides. I am highly disappointed with the situation I am dealing with currently. Kindly note that I purchased a sofa on April 1st from your store in Mississauga, the salesperson promised to deliver it home within two days.
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, it is April 20, and unfortunately, I did not receive the sofa nor hear from them.
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, I contacted
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customer service by email on April 18 to inquire about the issue, but they did not respond to me, which reflects
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insufficient customer service. I request to schedule my delivery
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, I regret to ask for a full money refund to my bank account. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Rimi Rimi

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task achievement
Consider including a brief introduction that sets the context more clearly for your complaint.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve clarity. For instance, separate your description of the problem from your request clearly into two distinct paragraphs.
suitable writing tone
Your polite tone and formal closing are well-executed, demonstrating professionalism.
complete response
You clearly stated the issue and your request, which is essential for task achievement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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