The maps below show how the town of Harborne changed from 1936 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show how the town of Harborne changed from 1936 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show how the town of Harborne changed from 1936 to 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate the transformation and establishment of new amenities in the city of Harborne from 1936 to 2007.
Overall
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it is clear that
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there were many modifications in the town from roads, recreational centre, and art gallery to resident's homes in 2007.
However
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, a few facilities
such
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as farm areas, rivers, bicycle lanes, and green areas were demolished over the period reflecting a shift towards more urban developments.
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data,
firstly
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, the northwest direction consists of 3 big trees
while
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in 2007, there was only 1 tree left which resulted in an increasing air population.
Moreover
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, in 1936, a river was located
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supply to the fields in the southeast direction.
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, there were government offices near the farms
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a cycle path close to it which later was converted into a road. In contrary, in 2007, the river and fields were removed to
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residential houses and a golf stadium for betterment of the society.
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, the museum took the location of the government buildings.
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, in the year 2007, the shopping mall was established in the centre of the city with a travel agency and a new supermarket for public access by modifying the flower shop, the sweet shop and butcher.
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, the location of a post office, bank and library remained unchanged
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1936 (in the town centre). The changes reflect the evolution of Harborne from a small town to a more developed suburban area.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • residential area
  • open spaces
  • agricultural land
  • commercial establishments
  • population density
  • amenities
  • sustainable development
  • green spaces
  • suburban area
  • transformation
  • development
  • evolution
  • comparative analysis
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