The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the standard proportion of three unhealthy nutrients used in different meals during the day.
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, the
dinner
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consumes more
sodium
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and saturated fat than any other meal.
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breakfast contains the least amount of these nutrients. In greater detail, breakfast is considered the healthiest food among the other meals. Because of the low quantity of
sodium
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14% and an equal amount of saturated fat and added
sugar
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only 16% in each.
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snacks, which contain almost the double number of added
sugar
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regard other dishes,
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%.
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, lunch uses nearly a similar ratio between these three nutrients, approximately one-third of
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one-fourth of saturated fat,
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20% of added
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.
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,
dinner
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is the least nutritious dish, as it includes a maximum value of
sodium
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of nearly double the amount compared to the other meals, 43%. To add more, saturated fat as well have a high percentage in
dinner
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at 37%. Surprisingly,
dinner
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has half the quantity of added
sugar
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that's in the snacks 23%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words dinner, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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