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The line graph below shows the percentage of people using the internet in the USA, Canada, and Mexico between 1999 and 2009

The line graph below shows the percentage of people using the internet in the USA, Canada, and Mexico between 1999 and 2009
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The line graph compares the proportion of
internet
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 users in three North American countries — the
USA
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,
Canada
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, and
Mexico
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 — over a ten-year period from 1999 to 2009.
Overall
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,
internet
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 usage increased significantly in all three countries throughout the period, with
Canada
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 experiencing the most dramatic growth. By the end of the decade, both
Canada
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 and the
USA
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 had reached similar high levels,
while
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Mexico
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 remained lower in comparison. In 1999, the
USA
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 had the highest percentage of
internet
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 users at around 20%, followed by
Canada
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 at approximately 10%.
Mexico
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,
by contrast
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, had the lowest usage, starting below 5%. Over the next few years,
internet
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 access grew steadily in all countries, but
Canada
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's growth was particularly rapid, overtaking the
USA
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 by 2005. By 2009,
internet
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 usage in both the
USA
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 and
Canada
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 had reached over 70%, with
Canada
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 slightly ahead.
Mexico
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also
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 showed a noticeable rise, reaching just over 40% by the end of the period,
although
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 it continued to lag behind the other two nations.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, usa, canada, mexico with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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