The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows the proportion of five different categories

industries

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of industries

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dominating

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brazil's economy in 2009 and 2019 with a prediction for 2029.

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it is clear that

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the majority of Brazil's state revenue

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has been

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finance

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financed

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for over 3 years .

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, the minority industry was in food processing in 2009 and manufacturing was in 2019 and will

be estimate

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in 2029.

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with,The proportion of finance

experiences

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experienced

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uptrend

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an uptrend

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over 3 years from just above 30% in 2009 and will be predicted to

upper

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40% for 2029,

while

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food

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the food

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processing industry was 10% and will be predicted same amount but in 2019

reached

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its peak at 20%.

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, manufacturing had a decline over 3

period

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by approximately 15% from 20% to 5% prediction for 2029.

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, in 2009, tourism was 25%

domination

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dominant

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brazil

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the Brazilian

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economy,

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and in the following

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years

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2019 had a decrease to one-fifth percentage similar

with

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forecast

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the forecast

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for 2029.

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Oil

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the Oil

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, coal and gas

sector

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sectors

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had

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the

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same number in 2009 and

estimation of

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estimated

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2029

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one-fourth percentage.

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, the proportion of

this

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sector was just below one-third percentage in 2019.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

185 words

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