The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The three
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charts illustrate the percentage of four different types of transportation in the UK from 1965 to 1985 and 2005.
Overall
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, private car users
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the highest percentage in all different years,
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public transport consistently ranked second. In 1965 the number of people who use a car was 40%, which made private cars the highest number.
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public transportation had 25%.
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, in 1985 using cars increased to 55% and at the same time public transport decreased to 20%.
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, in 2005 the share of cars rose sharply to 60%, with public transportation experiencing a gradual drop
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22%. Recreational
vehicles
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had a small minority, and in 1985 the number fell by 10%.
On the other hand
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, Lorries and other commercial
vehicles
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peaked at the same proportions, which was 20%.
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, Recreational
vehicles
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in 2005 had modest growth
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for 8% but Lorries and other commercial
vehicles
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dropped 10%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words vehicles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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