The question about when is the happiest
time
of life Use synonyms
has
linked with some fields Verb problem
is
such
as education, sociology, and even economy. Linking Words
While
some people state that Linking Words
adolecents
can spend the happiest Correct your spelling
adolescents
time
because they have a great amount of economic and social freedom, I believe that adult can enjoy their Use synonyms
life
more easily.
Teenagers have enough Fix the agreement mistake
lives
time
and freedom to seek their desires. In terms of Use synonyms
economic
perspective, they usually rely on their parents' income and Correct article usage
an economic
not
Add a missing verb
are not
concern
about financial pressures. Replace the word
concerned
For example
, I can enjoy studying abroad thanks to Linking Words
parents'
financial Correct pronoun usage
my parents'
supports
. If I did not receive their financial Fix the agreement mistake
support
supports
, I could not realize my dream. Fix the agreement mistake
support
Additionally
, regarding the sociological perspective, Linking Words
students
are not annoyed Use synonyms
with
Change preposition
by
Correct article usage
the stresses
stresses
Fix the agreement mistake
stress
from
working. Change preposition
of
While
workers often experience significant pressures under their Linking Words
resposibilities
Correct your spelling
responsibilities
on
business, Change preposition
in
students
can just stay Use synonyms
relax
and concentrate on making efforts to Wrong verb form
relaxed
persooing
their interests.
Correct your spelling
pursuing
Whereas
there are many Linking Words
advantageous
which teenagers have, I insist that Replace the word
advantages
adults
can spend much happier Use synonyms
time
because they have enough money Use synonyms
investing
in themselves to achieve their career goals. Change the verb form
to invest
As for
economic reasons, Change preposition
For
students
often have Use synonyms
limited
amount of money so Correct article usage
a limited
that
they sometimes have to give up their dreams. Correct word choice
apply
For example
, in Japan, most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
students
choose a stable job despite having another dream job because of economic reasons. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
adults
who have sufficient savings to challenge the dream, Use synonyms
they
can pursue it without worrying about Correct pronoun usage
apply
fiancial
issues. Correct your spelling
financial
In addition
, in the point of ethical view, children often experience Linking Words
the
bullying from someone, and Correct article usage
apply
that is
sometimes ignored by Linking Words
adults
. Insufficient mental maturity makes children difficult to express Use synonyms
tpreciselyheir
current situations and feelings. Correct your spelling
their
To solve
the personal issue regarding the conflict with others might be easier for Change the verb form
Solving
adults
because they are mentally Use synonyms
independence
.
In conclusion, Replace the word
independent
although
surely teenagers can Linking Words
spend
Verb problem
have
happy
Correct article usage
a happy
time
without economic and Use synonyms
busines
pressures, Correct your spelling
business
adults
can enjoy their life more easily because they have enough money and mental maturity to invest in themselves and seek their goals.Use synonyms
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