Nowadays,
Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
it this
this
become Correct your spelling
has
tradition
in many nations that senior citizens Add an article
a tradition
send
to Wrong verb form
are sent
orphanage
when they get old Fix the agreement mistake
orphanages
as
like in Britain, where all the staff take Change preposition
apply
care
of these old Use synonyms
people
and higher authorities Use synonyms
sometime
have to pay for their expenses. I think both Replace the word
sometimes
government
and Correct article usage
the government
family
should pay for Correct article usage
the family
this
, which I will discuss in subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, Linking Words
families
are Use synonyms
big
pillar for old Add an article
a big
the big
people
. As, when they get old they need love, affection, and Use synonyms
care
from their loved ones. If they Use synonyms
send
to that kind of place with strangers that will affect them negatively emotionally and Wrong verb form
are sent
health wise
. Add a hyphen
health-wise
Secondly
, there should be Linking Words
senior
person present in Add an article
a senior
family
because they are wise and Add an article
the family
experience
Wrong verb form
experienced
one
who will give Correct pronoun usage
ones
best
advice to their house members about difficult situations. Change the article
the best
For instance
, in India there is 90% of Linking Words
senior
Fix the agreement mistake
seniors
ones
live with their Correct pronoun usage
apply
families
without thinking of when parents get old they become Use synonyms
burden
on their children’s Add an article
a burden
shoulder
. Fix the agreement mistake
shoulders
Moreover
, parents give and do everything for their juvenile’s upbringing. So, when parents get old Linking Words
then
why don’t children take them as their responsibility now Linking Words
this
is the time for Linking Words
families
to take Use synonyms
care
Use synonyms
for
them.
Change preposition
of
However
, why higher authorities Linking Words
has
to pay for senior citizens because some Change the verb form
have
families
Use synonyms
are suffered
from poverty and they Wrong verb form
suffer
have
not enough to pay for their medicines and other things. Add a missing verb
do have
For example
, Linking Words
survey
done by Add an article
a survey
the survey
Hindustan
Correct article usage
the Hindustan
times
Capitalize word
Times
that
shows 80% of old Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
got medicines and need Use synonyms
able
things because of Correct word choice
apply
government’s
help Correct article usage
the government’s
who
Correct pronoun usage
which
provide
funds for them, which Wrong verb form
provided
saves
many lives. Wrong verb form
saved
Also
, there is Linking Words
pension
service for older Correct article usage
a pension
people
provided by Use synonyms
government
in many countries, where they get money each year for buying medicines and food. Add an article
the government
In
Change preposition
As
result
, that Correct article usage
a result
decrease
tension among Correct subject-verb agreement
decreases
families
who barely earn for their family.
Use synonyms
To conclude
Linking Words
with
, there Change preposition
apply
is
some many causes which Verb problem
apply
illustrates
why both Change the verb form
illustrate
government
and Correct article usage
the government
families
Use synonyms
has
to pay for the Change the verb form
have
care
of older Use synonyms
people
. AsUse synonyms
,
they are Remove the comma
apply
the
part of the society and family who should take Change the article
apply
care
Use synonyms
for
them.Change preposition
of
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