The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map shows an industry
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town of Norbiton now and
plannig
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planning
future development.
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, there will be a lot of
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from
purely
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industrial zone to a community-focused urban area
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, commercial, educational, and recreational facilities. In the present map, the area consists mainly of factories. There are eight factories—three on the west side and five on the east—connected by a road network around a central roundabout. There are main road in the south of the map and it
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connects
middle
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of town. In the future development, most of the factories will be replaced
housing
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facilities. A new road and bridge will extend north over the river, providing access to additional housing. Several community facilities will
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be introduced; these include a school in the east, a playground nearby, and a medical centre in the southeast. A shopping area will be built to the west of the roundabout, replacing some of the existing factories.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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