The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied pictures provide data on the changes in
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrial area.
Overall
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, future plans comprise the process of enlarging the roads and building new establishments in the place.
Firstly
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, roads will be set to the north part of the project, dividing the river into two parts.
Then
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, an additional circle will be added to the south
side
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of the
existed
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existing
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circle road. From the
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centre
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center
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center,
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there will be the way to the
north-west
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northwest
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part where new housings will be constructed.
Finally
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, the west
side
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of the main circle road will have ways to future buildings on the left and
in
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on
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the edge. In terms of
constructions
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construction
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, farmland will be moved to the right
side
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of the planned accommodation which will be located
in
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at
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the end of the
north way
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northway
.
Playground
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The playground
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and school will be built on the east
side
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from the middle.
Moreover
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,
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the Medical
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center
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centre
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and shops will be set on the right and left sides
from
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of
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the main part.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "set" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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