In today's era of
raising
living Correct your spelling
rising
cost
a significant number of individuals Correct subject-verb agreement
costs
concerned
about their expenses of Add a missing verb
are concerned
education
. It is advised that Use synonyms
education
should be free of cost. I agree with the statement to some extent.
There are two main reasons why schooling should be free for each and every person. Use synonyms
Firstly
, some talented students who belong to unprivileged communities, Linking Words
deprived
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are deprived
from
higher study. If these students Change the preposition
of
helped
financially to get educated Add a missing verb
are helped
then
it is not only beneficial for their personal, but Linking Words
also
good for Linking Words
countries
growth. These highly educated and talented students contribute to the GDP of Replace the word
the country's
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country
. When they do highly paid jobs, and pay taxes to the Add an article
the country
a country
government
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then
it Linking Words
leds
economic growth of Correct your spelling
leads
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country
. Add an article
the country
a country
secondly
, it reduces Linking Words
crime
rate. When Add an article
the crime
whole
Correct article usage
a whole
country
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eligible
to do Add a missing verb
is eligible
academic
without paying tuition fees, everyone would be swamped to make their future. After getting Fix the agreement mistake
academics
Use synonyms
education
Add an article
an education
then
people have plenty of options to set up their career which helps for Linking Words
good
mindset. Correct article usage
a good
Education
will facilitate mind stability, Use synonyms
due to
which negative thoughts ,Linking Words
such
as theft, drugs, Linking Words
muders
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murders
ecetra
, will never Correct your spelling
extra
etcetera
comes
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come
in
their minds.
That being said, I believe that without paying any Academy fee or fully funded schooling is very unrealistic because highly experienced teachers will not be ready to provide learning free of cost Change preposition
into
due to
which standards of Linking Words
education
will go down. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
government
can't subsidize Add an article
the government
full
academic Correct article usage
the full
fee
, especially Fix the agreement mistake
fees
developing
countries. Canada, Change preposition
in developing
for example
, is one of the developed Linking Words
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country
, but their Change to a plural noun
countries
government
just pay off Use synonyms
their
half of the tuition fees.
In conclusion, Correct pronoun usage
apply
although
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education
is Use synonyms
fundamental
right and everyone is equally eligible to acquire it, I believe that Add an article
a fundamental
fully
funded Academy free by Correct article usage
a fully
Use synonyms
government
is Add an article
the government
unprectical
.Correct your spelling
unpractical
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