The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The flow diagram illustrates the process of
instant
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noodles
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production.
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, the linear process
consisits
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consists
of eight main stages,
begining
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beginning
with the storage of
flour
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and ending with the sealing of packages.
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, the procedure involves the use of water and oil to produce
instant
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noodles
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. In the first stage, the
flour
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which
transported
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by trucks is stored inside the storage silos. After that, the unprocessed
flour
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is transferred to a mixer and
mix
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with water and oil. The mixed
flour
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is
then
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sent on rollers to make it flat as
sheet
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,
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before being cut into dough strips by machines and squeezed into noodle
dics
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discs
disc
, the foundation of
instant
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noodles
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. The next stage involves
in
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cooking these
noodle
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noodles
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dics
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discs
disc
with oil on a special heater. Once dried, the cooked
noodles
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are put inside cups,
while
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adding different
vegatables
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vegetables
and spices inside to add some
flavours
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flavour
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.
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but not
the
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least, the cups of
noodles
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are
labeled
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labelled
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and sealed using the label machines, forming the complete packages of
instant
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noodles
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words instant, noodles, flour with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • mixing ingredients
  • dough preparation
  • sheeting
  • steaming
  • cutting techniques
  • dehydration
  • deep-frying
  • cooling system
  • packaging
  • quality control
  • production line
  • mass production
  • food preservation
  • convenience food
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