The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisonswhererelevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisonswhererelevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makecomparisonswhererelevant.
The graph illustrates the several
process
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of how to sustain
plastic
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bottles, which
is
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consists
for
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nine steps. It
is involve
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collecting and sorting, crushing and washing,
processing
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and processing
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to raw
matirial
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material
materials
in order to
producing
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new products. To analyze
this
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diagram, we begin by taking a closer look at the data presented, as
it
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can be seen, the used
plactic
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plastic
bottles will be collected by
trunk
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the trunk
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to
recycling
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the recycling
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center
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then
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and then
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be classified to choose the useful bottles.
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these goods will be compressed into blocks so that the
mechines
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machines
can crush them and clean the dust and trash. After that, these
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plastic
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plastics
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will become
plastic
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pellets, which will be heated to shape the raw material. In the end, the raw material will be taken to the factories to
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new items,
such
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as bento boxes, clothing,
plastic
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bags and so on.
Due to
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the procedure, we have a more sustainable environment by reducing
the
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apply
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resource-wasting to
aviod
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avoid
sea
turtles
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turtle
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and other marine
animals
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animal
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injuries.

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