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Band 3.5

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The map demonstrates Stokeford city in 1930 and 2010.
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, Stokeford experienced
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a significantly
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significantly
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significant
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expantion
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expansion
 of
residental
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residential
 by
conversion
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the conversion
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 of
agracultural
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agricultural
 lands
in to
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into
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housing
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the housing
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. In past, there was
long
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a long
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 road and river which went
trought
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through
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the villange
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villange
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village
 south to north and had a bridge at the top of the map where they
are
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were
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 connected,
along side
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alongside
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 the river several houses, shops and post offices
was
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were
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 consecutively located. Meanwhile,
opposide
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opposite
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 of them,
primary
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the primary
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 school was positioned on top of the gardens and large houses.
Moreover
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, two farmlands
situated
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are situated
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south-west
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southwest
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 and
north-east
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northeast
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side
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sides
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.
However
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, throughout the years, Number of the swellings
have
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has
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 increased.
as
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As
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the
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a
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 result,
framlands
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farms
, shops, and
garden
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gardens
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got
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were
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 removed
instead
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 more homes
builded
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were built
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 on both sides of
expanded
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apply
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the highway.
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 large houses turned
in to
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into
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 retirement
home
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homes
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,
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Primary
Primarily
Primarly
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primary
 school increased
its
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their
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 size twice

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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