What do you believe is the most important problem facing the world today? Why is it the most important? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

technological advancements,

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beneficial,have led to privacy concerns,job displacements

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automation,

climate

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change

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and much more.

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,there are doubts concerning which one of them is

most

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important problem.In

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essay,

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will discuss

about

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how

climate

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change

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is the most

relevent

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relevant

problem for the world today

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their

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concerning impacts on humanity's wellness. to commence with,

climate

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change

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poses a severe threat to humanity,affecting weather patterns,causing

big scale

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droughts,massive floods and

esclating

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escalating

natural disasters.

it's

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impact on agriculture,water resources and human health makes it a critical issue.

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,thousands of humans died in a

giagantic

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gigantic

tsunami in

japan

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last

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year

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at the same time,people were fighting with each other over water in

south

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part of

africa

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because of drought.

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to that,ice is melting at

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speed

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the south

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south pole

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which

lead

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has led

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rise

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a rise

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water

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the water

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level

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levels

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all over the world.

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,all

sea shore

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cities like

New-york

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,Mumbai,Vancouver and so on are at

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apply

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risk of drowning.

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this

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,the temperature of our planet is spiking which could make

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environment inhabitable if the trend is not reversed. In conclusion,

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admit that we are

surronded

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surrounded

by a plethora of problems that

needs

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to be solved

immidiently

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imminently

but

climate

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change

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is the only issue which is endangering our and all

living-being's

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living

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existance

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existence

on earth.

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this

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concern should be resolved on

priority

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a priority

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basis.

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Make sure to proofread your essay for spelling and grammatical errors to enhance clarity.

Coherence and Cohesion

Organize your ideas more clearly by using more linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your argument.

Task Achievement

Provide more specific examples to support your main points, such as mentioning specific policies or initiatives taken to combat climate change.

Task Achievement

The essay addresses the prompt clearly and expresses a strong opinion on climate change as the most important issue.

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10
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

217 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

existential threat
escalating
natural disasters
social cohesion
economic stability
disparities
unrest
technological advancements
privacy concerns
automation
digital divide
inequality
global health crises
international cooperation
vulnerabilities
environmental degradation
deforestation
biodiversity
pollution
ecological balance
cybersecurity threats
digital warfare
destabilize
compromise

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