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The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates some changes in the percentage of individuals who were given birth in
Australia
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 and those born outside Australian
cities
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,countryside and
towns
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 in 1995 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is seen that more
people
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 born in
Australia
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 and outside
Australia
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 were given birth to in
cities
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 in 1995 and 2010,
whereas
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 the
number
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 of individuals born in rural environments and
towns
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 in and outside
Australia
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 was greater than that
of
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in
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 2010. In 1995, the
number
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 of
people
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 born in
cities
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 in
Australia
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 was around 50 compared to outside of
Australia
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 which was 60
people
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. Regarding rural areas, there were approximately 30 and exactly 40
people
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 born in and outside
Australia
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 respectively.
On the other hand
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, 20
people
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 were born in
towns
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 in
Australia
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 and about 10
people
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 were born outside
Australia
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. In 2010, there was a higher
number
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 of
people
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 born in
cities
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 with figures 60 and 80
according to
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 the ratio of
people
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 born in
Australia
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 and those born outside
Australia
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.
In addition
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,there were around 10
people
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 born in Australian
towns
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 and countryside,
while
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 the
number
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 of
people
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 born outside Australian
towns
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 and rural communities was 5.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, cities, towns, people, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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